The instructor conferences were easily the most helpful part
of the writing process. It was nice to
get feedback on what we were writing so we could further perfect our
essay. I liked it when we had
conferences right before the essays were due.
This was the most useful because I had already gotten my essay to a
point where I thought it was pretty good, so any advice given was to perfect
it. After the conferences it was nice to
be able to fix specific issues and just add points that were missing, so the
revision process wasn’t too hard and arduous.
When the instructor conferences were held too early and before my draft was
completed or refined, it was less useful.
I didn’t know if my draft was still headed in the right direction or if
the last part of my essay was as good as the first part. However, when the conferences were earlier in
the writing process, it was nice to be able to figure out how to proceed
writing the essay and discuss ideas. The
conferences were still useful, but useful in different ways as the times when
they were held right before the due date.
This weekend, I am very excited to hear from Elder Uchtdorf. I feel kind of bad choosing a favorite, but I
have to say, he is easily the one that I enjoy hearing from the most. I think that he always uses relevant examples
and stories that are easy to relate to, like fairy tales or plane analogies. I also like listening to him because he comes
of very loving and I know that he cares for each and every one of our Heavenly
Father’s children. I think his brilliant
smile and body language also makes his visual rhetoric very effective. I love all his talks and think they keep
people’s attention well along with giving great revelation and insight. Along with everyone else on this planet, I
also love Elder Holland’s talks. He is
so passionate and that comes through his voice and his tears when he gives his
talks. He speaks with great conviction
and knowledge and empowers everyone who listens to act on what they’ve
heard. After I listen to his talks, I
just want to go conquer the world and share the gospel to everyone! I am very excited for this year’s general
conference and I can’t wait to hear from my favorite speakers.
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