I have chosen to write my Rhetorical Analysis on the 5-A
article called “Wal-Martian Invasion,” because who wouldn’t want to analyze an
article with such a clever name! I was
glad to see that the article lived up to the high expectations its title
set.
It is written to the whole world, but with an emphasis on
Wal-Mart shoppers and associates. It
talks about how Wal-Mart, which started as such a harmless business, has
handled matters poorly, such as employee payment, and how these improperly
handled matters are becoming extremely serious as the company expands.
It is written in such a clever way that I know of several
things I can use to argue its effectiveness, yet I can do so without sounding
like I’m just stating the obvious. One
example of its clever format is how it calls attention to Earthlings warning
them of the Wal-Martians, who were harmless upon first landing, but now have
become dangerous. This both sets the
audience as the whole world (because Wal-Mart seriously has become so big that
it really is a world matter) and explains how Wal-Mart wasn’t dangerous at
first, but has grown to the point where it is now.
Another thing I love about the article is the disposition,
they way in which the writer releases information slowly so as to keep up the
reader/writer contract and keep the reader interested. Examples of this include the first sentence,
which talks about the problems that have been created without yet saying what
created them. These are just a few small
examples of the neat tools that make this article effective, and I hope to use
all the best ones to clearly present the credit this article deserves.
I feel like her banter about aliens has the opposite effect on me. For me it's taking a serious issue and putting a funny spin on it, because face it, the old Star Trek show is so ancient that it's funny now, as are most old sci-fi shows.
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