Just Another Day of Blog Writing

Tommy and I actually started with our topic too narrow and we have now expanded it to cover a few more arguments considering why young adults are leaving the church. At first, we were just gonna go with pornography and how members of religious organizations are falling under its evil power but then we decided pornography is one of the reasons why the views of the church and the views of the world are growing further apart. So with that broader topic we can discuss more of why young adults are leaving the church and then offer up our solution. So our argument is pretty well developed now but we still need help figuring out how to implement more sources and have more analysis. Our 4 pager was pretty good so I think we're definitely on the right track. Since we are doing option 2, our audience is church clergy from around the world. Singe the argument has very diverse beliefs there may be few things we agree on but all churches are losing young adults because of our reason and every major religion has strong morals that members are expected to follow. So, as long as we connect to the audience on a moral basis and respect the divine power that all religions have, it should be a very well crafted essay.